Thursday, 7 May 2015

Writing Workshops Term Two Week Three

"ROAR" in the jungle.
Tigers are all around.
"ROAR!"
My last breath.
It's getting louder.
"ROAR"
I froze.
He was there.





In my writing workshop I
learnt that lots of simple sentences
can be really effective.
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous10 May 2015 at 15:24

    Hi Corbin, you really used the simple sentences effectively to the highest standard possible fabulous job Corbin.

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  2. Anonymous10 May 2015 at 15:29

    Roar that simple sentence strategy was really effecteve

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